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No Better Time Than Now (re-post)

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Given what unfolded in Baton Rouge and Minneapolis last week, a poem I wrote last summer has been running through my mind.  I posted it here originally, though in a very rough form.  A call for publication last spring encouraged me to get it back out and rework it.  It was ultimately rejected, but that doesn’t diminish my desire to put it up here.

Downloadable:  Press Release (Police Departments)

FOR IMMEDIATE RELEASE:  (month, date, year)

(City)

On (date) at (time), officers responded to reports of  (criminal code number + criminal act).  Upon arrival, officers noted that (first and last name of citizen) was (circle all that apply)

  1. behaving erratically
  2. reaching for a possible weapon
  3. making eye contact with them.

Officers were unable to de-escalate the situation with Mr. / Ms. (last name of citizen) because they feared for their lives and had to make a split-second decision to (circle one)

  1. restrain
  2. tase
  3. shoot.

While it is unfortunate that Mr. / Ms. (last name of citizen) died (circle one)

  1. at the scene,
  2. in transport to custody,
  3. while in custody,

police investigators have recommended that officers not face disciplinary charges based on (circle all that apply)

  1. review of dashcam video that did not include sound
  2. the lack of forensic evidence gathered at the scene
  3. statements from witnesses who were found to be unreliable
  4. reports submitted by the officers.

These findings were accepted by (circle all that apply)

  1. the chief of police who hired the officers
  2. the mayor who is running for re-election on a “tough on crime” platform
  3. the prosecuting attorney whose family member was killed by someone from the same demographic as Mr. / Ms. (last name of citizen).

The issue is now closed.  The (City) Police Department remains committed to effective policing strategies and building positive relationships with the community.

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~Jeff Burd

 

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July 11, 2016 at 10:49 pm

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So You Find Yourself Closer to Fifty Than Forty

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You’ve spent a lot of time this past month lying face down on your bed with your right arm dangling off the side, your hand brushing the carpet.  You keep your iron handy when you do this, because it comes into play soon enough.  There’s a good reason why you’re doing this, but they are outnumbered by the poor reasons why you’re still doing this.  You could have been done with it a few months ago but for denial about your age and physical state.

It occurred to you a little less than a month ago that you’re turning forty-six.  You said it to a guy you work with when you were playing golf and he was wondering why you were only putting.  That led to a discussion about your physical state, and at one point you said your shoulder was messed up again, and it was mostly because you’re about to turn forty-six.  You didn’t mention the poor form you use when lifting weights, nor did you mention your refusal to see the doctor, because you verbalized “forty-six” almost reflexively, and it was about a mile out of your mouth before you knew it.  You were stunned into silence.  You were going to be forty-six in less than a month.

Forty-six means you’re closer to fifty than forty.  Forty-six feels far older than forty, mainly because fifty is far older than forty, and now you’re past the half-post mark between the two. Hell, forty-six doesn’t even look like a comfortable number.  Look at it:  46.  The four looks like he lost his footing and is sinking into quicksand, helpless to help himself.  He’s got one arm bent at the elbow and his hand is smacking his head, like “Krikey…  what did I do?”  The six looks like some rube in denial about his beer belly.  He’s curving his back, thinking “I can suck my belly in closer and people won’t notice it so much.”  But he still can’t see his feet.  Together, they’re the last two people left at the church picnic when the pastor said pair up for a three-legged race, and they’re stuck with each other.

The ramp-up to forty-six thus far has mostly meant that you’re in denial.  You think you can still run faster than you did when you were a teen.  That’s mostly bullshit.  Hills kill you anymore.  And humidity?  Forget it—you’ll walk.  Your back is sore after some runs, and your legs are weak.  Your chiropractor keeps asking, “What the hell have you been doing?”  You think you can bounce back from a grueling school year after a peaceful weekend.  It’s more like a two- or three-week depressurization process because somehow the job keeps getting harder the longer you do it.  You think that you can’t suffer injuries and that you don’t have to take time to recover from them.  That’s why you’ve been spending so much time face down on your bed lately.  It’s not practice for the inevitable; rather, it’s the position you assume for the exercises you have to do if you want your shoulder to heal properly.

It could all be over with at this point.  You could have bought a shoulder brace that helps you ice your damn shoulder a lot earlier than you did (Try this at home:  Live by yourself, get a shoulder injury, and try to ice it when you don’t have another pair of hands to help you place the ice and secure a bandage around your shoulder and torso.  I’ll bet you wish you had one of these.)  You could have gone to physical therapy earlier, rather than waiting eight months, thinking that your shoulder will get better on its own.  You could have done the exercises you were supposed to do while you were in physical therapy rather than telling the therapist that you were doing them:  “Am I doing my exercises?  I sure am!  Twice a day, just like you said!  What’s that?  What two-pound weight am I using?  Why…  my iron, of course!  It’s very handy!”  It turns out the iron is very handy, and that the exercises help a lot.  So those are the big lessons you’ve learned as you’ve approached forty-six.  You’re not forty anymore.  The doctor knows what’s good for you.  Stop telling lies.  Also, stop acting like you’re thirty-six.  This is the same thing you were doing then.  Haven’t you gained any wisdom over the last ten years?!

Everybody is going to ask what you’ll be doing for your forty-sixth birthday.  You don’t know for sure beyond spending some of the day lying face down on your bed with your right arm dangling off the side, your hand brushing the carpet.  Your iron will be nearby.

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July 1, 2016 at 5:00 am

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The Cubs Are 28-11, But I Don’t Care. Yet.

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The Cubs have reached the quarter post of the season with a 28-11 record.  This is unlike anything almost any living Cub fan has ever seen.  This has come courtesy of an other-worldly pitcher who has already thrown a no-hitter this season, a pair of corner infielders who punish the ball for RBIs, and a bunch of opportunistic team members who pick up for each other.  It seems somebody new is surprising the fans each night with a clutch hit or a hot streak at the plate or some solid innings of work on the mound (the Cubs have the best overall ERA in the NL and lead in a bunch of other team pitching stats, which is probably the best indicator of the strength of the team).  Wrap all that up with some solid managing, and you have quite a team.  This is causing unparalleled joy at the corners of Clark and Addison, but that’s not uncommon for Cubs fans at this time of year.  Even their worst teams over the last 30 years had still not been mathematically eliminated from playoff contention by this time, and Cubs fans have learned if nothing else to take their joys wherever they may find them.

It’s interesting to note, too, that with the Cubs playing so well and the White Sox standing as the second best team in the American League that the inter-league series due to unfold in late June could ignite a civil war.  Most likely, Cubs fans will probably do something stupid to Sox fans visiting Wrigley, U.S. Cellular Field will remain The Unfriendly Confines to visiting Cubs fans, and the Tribune will keep the body count, both in numbers wounded and killed.  Because Chicago needs more reasons for more violence.

There’s another interesting scenario taking shape for me outside of the forthcoming Cubs / Sox match-up:  The Cubs could face the Orioles in the World Series (the Orioles are unexpectedly leading the AL).  Who would I cheer for if my all-time team squares off against my hometown team?  The Orioles, of course.  They haven’t seen the Fall Classic  for 33 years, and may never see it again in my lifetime.  According to most everybody who has ever heard of baseball, the Cubs are the team of the present and the future.  They may well get to the series this year, and several times over the next several years, so there will still be chances to cheer for them if the franchise doesn’t screw things up.

Still…  I don’t care.  Not yet.  I’ve been to a couple of games this year, tuned into a few on TV and radio, and casually watched the standings and stats, but I’m not there yet.  I’m not going to be for a few more months.  There’s a good reason for that:  Soccer.

This is going to be a huge summer for soccer given the Olympics, the European Championships, and the Copa Centenario.  It’ll kick off for the US (pun intended) in two weeks when the Yanks take on Columbia, and in a little over two weeks I’ll be screaming my lungs out when the US plays Costa Rica at Soldier Field.  It’ll be my first experience going to a US Men’s National Team match, and I can’t wait to get there.

I first wrote about soccer herein when I was in Iowa City two summers ago and had the fortune to live the World Cup group stage matches with American Outlaws.  There may be no better way to come into the sport than by being absorbed into the fanatical body of USMNT superfans, and the enthusiasm with which they infused me hasn’t waned since I was with them.  I’ve watched almost every USMNT match since then, and have taken a shine to Premier League soccer in the past year (Tottenham Hotspur is my side).  In fact, I’ve watched more soccer in the last year than I have in the previous 44 years of my life combined.

I see a lot in soccer, and kick myself now (pun intended) for not paying much attention to it before I took an interest in World Cup soccer some 16 or 17 years ago.  One thing that keeps me hooked with the USMNT is the idea that they are the whole country’s team.  We can unite behind one unit that plays almost year ‘round to the tune of 15-20 matches minimum.  There are no bitter regional rivalries.  Plus, a Frank DeFord editorial on NPR last fall said it best:  Soccer is the world’s sport because it is accessible to most of the people in the world.  The average person can see himself when he watches soccer.  There are so few physical freaks playing the game that they are hardly worth noting.  NFL and NBA players almost always have to be bestowed with the gift of size, and baseball isn’t far behind in that regard, but soccer players are average-sized men and women in incredible physical shape.  It is truly available to everybody; it shows few financial restraints to participation (see:  hockey) and is played worldwide with as little as a ball and a pitch.  It’s a Socialist ideal in that regard.  What’s more, the player pool on the whole isn’t a roving pack of thugs who rape and terrorize college campuses and the subsequent cities in which they play professionally, nor do they assemble posses to travel with them to all destinations, nor do they make a mockery out of the public education system and higher education (see:  NCAA football and basketball).

Outside of my enthusiasm for the US teams, soccer on the world stage is an amazing game.  A typical European club team features players from several continents and has a world-wide fan base greater than the Cubs or Dodgers or even the damn Yankees.  The game moves fast and takes place in a quantifiable amount of time (except in elimination situations), and it’s hard to score goals.  So when the ball does find the net, holy crap the bedlam that ensues.  I was stunned at how feverish the American Outlaws are when the US scores; I’d probably wet my pants if I were at a Manchester United or Bayern Munich match when it happens.

Given all this, why shouldn’t I be watching soccer?!

Besides the USMNT playing in the Copa Centenario, the US Women are slated to defend their Olympic gold from 2012 and remain a universe-beating entity, and before that European teams will be squaring off in what some consider to be the real World Cup (I’ll be pulling for England).  So baseball, especially Cubs fever, is going to have to take a back seat until the feet and heads of the rest of the world decide who is the greatest.  I’m sure by the time it’s all over, I’ll be plenty ready for some of the good old American pastime.  And it looks like I’ll be riding it into late October.

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May 20, 2016 at 6:12 pm

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Maybe This Isn’t Funny After All

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Since I’ve been in the mood this last week to put things up on The Seeker that I haven’t been able to publish, I figured I’d give this poem some exposure.  The writing of it was a long time coming.  I registered the episode on which it is based as nothing more than an absurd occurrence from my life stemming from me perhaps being too glad to offer some help in a teaching circumstance.  It’s always made for a funny story, but I never saw it as a poem until two years ago when I was alluding to the episode with a bunch of seniors in my Public Speaking class.  Something clicked in my mind, and pretty soon I was casting the whole thing into this poem.

I work shopped it first thing when I was out in Iowa two years ago, and was taken aback at how freakin’ serious everybody took it.  It’s supposed to be funny; at least as funny as my brother found the story when I first told it to him 9 years ago, and he couldn’t stop laughing.  I was hoping it would be funnier still that I used something as “elevated” and “sublime” as poetry to communicate an uncomfortable, intrusive circumstance—I figured I’d have a a great juxtaposition, if nothing else.

Still, maybe this isn’t as funny as I think it is.  About fifteen publications seemed to think it’s either not funny or not very well written.  What do those bastards know, anyhow?!?!  The local public library must not have liked it, either, since it didn’t get any recognition in their recent creative writing contest.  What mystified me the most about this one, though, was that it was also rejected by a publication that was specifically calling for submissions “…by a man, about something that happened to him, that by and large could only have happened to a man, and that shows women Who Men Are.”  The editors took a lot of shit for their stance, so maybe it’s better that this one didn’t appear in it.

*

Double Entendre
You, the doctor, and his intern
are all in the exam room.
The intern is young.  Blonde.
Her eager eyes sparkle
as she hovers beside him.

“Do you mind if she’s in here for this?”
the doctor asks.  “She’s got
several requirements
I don’t want her to miss.”

The intern clutches a clipboard.
You imagine a neatly typed checklist.
This next task looms at the bottom
next to a barren, untouched little box.

It’s cool with you.  The doctor probes
and talks his way through several
tender angles and steps aside.  The intern
reaches for a glove, and you realize too late
that the ‘here’ she’s going to be ‘in’
is much more than the exam room.

~Jeff Burd

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April 22, 2016 at 7:00 am

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Take Him to the River, pt. 2

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continued from yesterday…

Pre-dawn was muggy along the river and in the forests that edged the water.  Thin blankets of mist clung to the ground, but dispersed a few feet up and disappeared into the grey sky.  A trio of turkey vultures soared through the fresh, moist air over the river.  The rushing waters below muted their calls as they circled in and out of the walls of trees on both banks.

The headlights on Michael’s truck pierced the mist as he drove down the narrow dirt path that lead from the main road to the river.  As he neared the end, the lights reflected off two trucks parked at the head of a narrow beach that had formed along the river bank.  Father Bernard stood in his black cassock with his head bowed as he leaned back against Guy’s truck.  His chin touched his white collar.  He clutched his bible with both hands.

Michael could see the silhouette of Guy sitting by himself in his truck.  Leon and Big Jean sat in Leon’s truck.  An orange glow lit their faces when Leon dragged on his cigarette.   Michael parked his truck and got out.  Sam opened his door and stepped out.  They had both dressed in cargo shorts and mesh utility vests.  Michael wore a red t-shirt beneath his vest.  Sam wore a blue t-shirt and a canvas porkpie hat.  He was more than a man in size, and his bulk still managed to surprise even those who saw him frequently.  If he kept growing, he would soon rival Big Jean as the largest man in the county.  He still wore a boy’s face, though.  His cheeks were pink from the summer sun, but smooth and unblemished.

“Good morning, Father Bernard,” the boy said.  He touched his brow with two fingers in a casual salute and stepped to the bed of the truck to retrieve tackle.

Michael held up his hand.  “Not yet, Sam.”

The boy stopped and walked to the front of the truck.  Leon and Guy stepped out of their trucks and joined them.

Sam smiled at the lot of them as they stood in a small circle.  “I don’t think we’ll catch anything.  The water’s moving too fast.  Look at it.”  He gestured to the river.  “You don’t have to look.  You can hear it.”

The solemn faces around him offered no response.  Michael’s eyes darted between them.  This wasn’t a good idea, but it would be over quick enough.  There had to be a way to explain to Sam how this had come to happen, but that was for later.

Father Bernard released one hand from his bible and extended his arm, gesturing to the river.  He walked wide of the group to the edge of the water.

Sam looked to his father, who nodded and nudged his head in the direction of the water.  Sam took a step toward the water and stopped.  “What’s going on, Dad?”  

“Go on, Sam,” Michael said.  “Go on down to the river.”

Guy snapped, “Boy, do what your pa says.”

Michael felt Leon’s eyes on him, again pinning him down.  He looked to Leon, who brought a finger to his chin and ran the tip of it on the grey stubble.  Leon said, “You go, too, Michael.”

Michael sucked in a breath to speak, but couldn’t find words.  He was stuck in place, Leon’s stare or not.  He heard the squeak of a car door opening and looked over to see Big Jean haul himself out of the passenger side of Leon’s truck and walk around the bed.  Once he was clear of the tailgate, everyone saw the shotgun in his hands.  Big Jean brought the weapon across his chest and pumped the slide handle.  The scrape and sharp click of metal made Michael’s stomach jump.

“Go on,” Leon commanded.  “The boy came from you.”

Michael’s hands trembled beyond his control.  He turned to his son.  The boy’s face was red.  Tears perched on the ledges of his eyelids.  “Dad.”

“Come on, Sam,” he replied.  He took the boy’s cold hand in his own and put his other hand on his back.  He turned his face to Sam’s ear and said in a low, plain tone, “Walk in front of me.  Keep walking.  Don’t look back no matter what.”  It was the only protection he could offer.

Big Jean fell in line several paces behind them.  He raised the shotgun to his shoulder and slid his finger inside the trigger guard.

Michael’s son stepped into the cool river ahead of him.  The boy’s shoulders were convulsing and Michael knew he was sobbing, but the gushing river water muffled the sound.

Michael neither heard nor felt his own feet splash into the river.  To his right and around a bend, the sun peaked over the top of the forest.  To his left, Father Bernard held a hand in the air as he read aloud from the bible in the palm of his other hand.  Michael couldn’t hear the words.  He didn’t have to hear them to know they were wrong.  They had always been wrong.  Sam knew that.  Of course he did.  The boy had been brave in the face of all everyone had told him was right and true.  He was not the one who had faltered.

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April 18, 2016 at 7:00 am

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Unpublishable; Unwinnable

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I read a transcendent article on the craft of writing about two years ago.  It came from Poets & Writers, which is a good source for a lot of things writing.  The slant of the article dealt with using forward momentum in the plot of a story—and forward momentum only.  Thanks for that, Benjamin Pearcy.  I had never thought about that before reading “Don’t Look Back,” but the more I thought about it the more it made sense.  I started to think about the stories I’ve used in my English and Creative Writing classes, and there it was all of a sudden, like a neon sign:  Most of them used forward momentum almost entirely.  And then a few other pieces fell in place about using dialogue to push a plot forward, and before long I had taken in a pretty damn important lesson about writing.  In fact, I felt like I had take a big step forward.  All I needed was a vehicle with which to practice, and of course since I was intentionally looking for a story to write, I couldn’t find one.  I had to wait.

A few weeks after my “discovery,” the Michael Sam controversy broke as the NFL draft was approaching, and on my drive into work one morning an entire story dropped in my lap.  Some news sources tried to make a story out of Sam’s father’s reaction to his son being gay, and a gear switched in my mind that opened a door, and out fell that story.  I drafted it out over the next two days, being mindful of using forward momentum entirely, and felt pretty good about what I put out.  It went through a few edits with a few friends, and I was heartened by comparisons to Shirley Jackson, who is one of my favorite short story writers.  I felt pretty confident as I started sending it out.

No dice.  It’s been rejected about 30 times, with only one “maybe.”  The editors at Midwestern Gothic liked the story well enough and emailed me back with a suggestion about tweaking a few things and they’d reconsider it.  I followed their suggestions and saw how it impacted the story, but still struck out when I sent it back to them.  Finally, I entered it into a creative writing contest at the local public library, but no dice there, either.  My final thought on the story is that it’s a good thing I have The Seeker!  At least I can put the story somewhere where more people can see it.  I’m going to put it up right now in two parts, the second to follow tomorrow.

Sure, this is a defeat because I couldn’t find a home for it.  Big deal.  I’m still learning a lot about fiction writing, and practice is so, so important.

*

Take Him to the River

By Jeff Burd

“Take him to the river.”

Leon said it.  Michael looked up from the other end of the table where he had sunk into himself and was staring into his lap at his folded hands.  Leon’s face was impassive.  His grey eyes held Michael in his seat.  Leon flicked the ash from the tip of his cigarette into the ashtray in front of him, and then let the remaining butt rest on the lip.  He spoke in a low tone.  “We’re going to stop this before it goes any further.”  

Father Bernard sat on one of the long sides of the table and slowly nodded his head.  The pale, loose skin under his chin creased and uncreased with each movement.  

On the other side of the one-room lodge, Big Jean leaned over the pool table and struck the cue ball with his stick.  The ball cracked against another ball, which dropped into one of the pockets with a dull thud.  Big Jean stood up and turned to them.  He let his stick slide through his hands until the bumper end thumped on the floor.  “What if he starts this coming out crazy talk when he’s there?”  He looked to Father Bernard, and then Leon, and then Guy, who was pouring Southern Comfort at the bar.  He lumbered over to the table and sat down across from Father Bernard.  “People are gonna start looking back at us.  What will they think?  We been pullin’ for Sam all along.  Supporting him.  The whole damn town.”

Guy moved to the table and sat next to Father Bernard with his whiskey in front of him.  A sweet, pungent alcohol smell rose from the half-full glass.

Michael leaned back in his chair and folded his arms across his chest.  “Sam won’t go for this.  Maybe he’s confused.  I’m not sure what to say to him.  He won’t go for another baptism.”  He looked to Father Bernard.  “Sorry, Father.”

Big Jean tapped a fat finger on the table.  “You’re still his pa.”

Guy piped in, “You still say what’s what.”

They were right, of course.  They were alluding to one of the centuries-old founding philosophies of The Faithful Servants:  To mainten the saintliness of family ordre.  Michael knew all eight of them, the same as everybody else in the room.  There was no arguing the philosophies, though Michael had absentmindedly opened his mouth to reply.  

The lodge was quiet in a way that Michael had never experienced, like every aspect of the place had been engineered to shut down in a crisis so the brotherhood could focus.  It seemed like even the cigarette smoke hanging in the air and the dark burlap curtains blocking the windows pressed noise down and away to create absolute still.

All eyes were on Leon, who still held Michael in his seat with his stare.  

Michael knew he had said far too much, and now he wished he hadn’t said anything at all.  It would be best to get in front of things before they got any crazier.  “Why take him to the river?  He’s been church baptized.”  He looked to Father Bernard, who nodded.  He continued, “I mean, that’s our ritual, too.  I know that.  But Sam’s not becoming a Faithful Servant.  He’s too young.”  

Leon shot back, “He will never be a Faithful Servant.  It’s not allowed for him now.”

Guy broke his gaze from Leon and turned to Michael.  “He’s right, Mike.  Plus, he goes to campus and they’ll kill him in the locker room.  Them linemen don’t go for that stuff.  Nobody does.  Sam wouldn’t have a chance.”

Leon nodded at Guy to continue.  “Is that how you want it?  You get a phone call from the coach or the athletic director?”  Guy looked to his Southern Comfort.  He seemed satisfied in having asked a difficult question.

Michael could only nod at what they were saying.  A phone call would be bad.  Maybe the river would work to wash away some of the notions the boy had brought up.  

It was quiet again.  Michael’s go-ahead was no longer a formality.  The others had settled on what they must do.

Leon looked to Big Jean.  “The river will wash this all away.”  He had angled his hands off the table like he was trying to hold something down.  He shook his head as he looked at Guy and Father Bernard.  He returned his gaze to Michael.  “Tell the boy you want to pull some blue cats out of the river.  It’ll be a nice father-son thing before he goes away.  And hell, maybe he needs to give you a chance to talk to him about what he told you.”

Michael shrugged and shook his head.  It would be best to let them get this out of their system, and then he would never bring it up again.  Never.

“Dawn tomorrow,” Leon commanded.  “Not at the usual spot.”

Big Jean nodded.  “There’s a spot downstream.  Around a bend.”

*

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April 17, 2016 at 7:00 am

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Who Were They

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I got to Milwaukee on Monday of Spring Break two weeks ago to see The Who.  It was a delayed trip because the lads were supposed to play up there in October on the last leg of their 50th Anniversary tour, which is also their farewell tour.  But viral meningitis stops for no man, not even leather-lunged Roger Daltrey.  He contracted it, he recovered from it, and The Who found Milwaukee for only the third or fourth time ever.  I’m glad I was there for one last head-smashing, ear-drum-bleeding, face-melting concert that I thought I’d be lucky to limp away from.

Well, it was a concert, at least.  Some pre-show projections cautioned the audience not to smoke because Daltrey is allergic to smoke and it might inhibit his performance or be cause to end it.  I have no issue with that, other than what I came to view as a traditional Who concert smelled a whole lot less like what I was used to.  When I saw the band in 2012 on the Quadophenia tour, it took less than a minute after the lights went down and the band launched into “I Am the Sea” for a cloud of weed smoke to engulf The All-State Arena.  Same with The Tweeter Center in 2002, except in all fairness most of that smoke was left over from Robert Plant’s opening set.

One can never count on Pete Townsend to be in good spirits, whether he’s sailing one of his boats, acquiring and editing books, recording in the studio, or playing live.  That’s part of what you expect from the tormented genius.  He heads the band that replayed a song at The Tweeter Center show in 2002 because it didn’t sound right.  Before playing “Baba O’Riley” at a Chicago show  2007, Townsend made it clear how he’s always felt about the track:  “We fucking hate this next song.  The only reason we play it is because you love it.”  He has also on numerous occasions said he doesn’t much care for Daltrey.  I’ve always accepted this side of Townsend because I see it is a manifestation of his creativity and how exacting he is.  I wish more artists felt free to express themselves in that manner.  How strange it was, then, to see him in a jovial mood as he talked with the audience throughout the night.  He joked about the extravagances of the rock star life (“back to the hotel at 3AM…  bed by 9AM…  wake up in late afternoon…”), and asked the audience to be patient with the band because they’re old and because “…we’ve done so many tours that there’s a chance you and I could be related.”

It took a good 45 minutes for the band to really start to fly.  Daltrey struggled to get his voice going, and Townsend confided that he himself wasn’t feeling good and the audience would be able to tell in his singing.  He was right, though he nailed a damn good gritty imagining of “I’m One.”  Still, once they brought out “Join Together” complete with a live Jew’s harp, the boys were close as they could get to The Who at their full power almost 40 years ago.  They rolled for another hour and fifteen minutes after that.  My only disappointment was they opened with “Who Are You” rather than close with it or at least save it for when they were fully warmed up.

I expected it to be an emotional evening.  There is no better rock band than The Who, and I’ve counted them as my all-time favorite band for more than half my life.  I knew I would be watching mortality unfold on stage.  I could never again play Who’s Next or Quadrophenia with the thought that I’d see the band live again.  It was going to be a funeral.  But there was a greater theme being played out throughout the night.  The band still brought their game, still found a meaningful reason to tour beyond dusting off their greatest hits and grabbing cash, and still produced an excellent show.  My ears weren’t ringing when I left (first time seeing The Who that they weren’t!), I wasn’t buzzed from alcohol or excessive weed smoke, and I didn’t feel like I’d been in a mosh pit or that I had lived every song.  Instead, I felt satisfied knowing that the band met the audience at an intersection far down the roads from where both began.  It was a point at which the band that played with a nihilistic bent when they were young and a fan base that was known to be rowdy and violent probably never thought they would or could meet.  That’s all a gift.  If the band can still do it in their 70s and people will still pay to see it, what’s to stop any of us from pushing on with our art?  There’s no expiration date stamped on any of us until we decide to stamp it.

Written by seeker70

April 4, 2016 at 7:41 pm

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